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          中考優秀作文點評:我的外公

          作者:作文大全來源:作文范文網 時間:2019-06-21 閱讀: 字體: 在線投稿
            教了三十多年書,從不會干農活的外公,退休后仍然不服老,不愿在家吃閑飯,竟迷上了種菜。
            老家后山坡上荒了多年的一大塊地,外公一鍬一鍬地翻土。土硬得板結,一鍬下去,才刨起一層浮土。外公卻很耐心地彎著腰,使著勁,從早上翻到中午,從中午翻到黃昏。他用鋤頭柄把泥敲碎,攏起壟,壟不直,便又攏,反反復復,直至平平直直,才種上洋番薯。 可畢竟不懂農事,盡管積極施肥、澆水,外公人黑瘦了,洋番薯是結了一大串一大串的,卻個個都小如鴿蛋——媽媽削都不愿削,吃時只好煮熟剝皮,用油、鹽、醬拌著吃。大家都暗笑,這下外公總好歇手了吧! 可是,收了洋番薯沒多久,一個下雨天,外公跑去鎮上買來了一大籃豆秧、玉米籽,又去種他的菜。外公說得好:“種菜能吃到新鮮菜,又能活動身體,一舉兩得,多好!” 為了種上更多樣的時令菜蔬,外公到處串門,像個好學的小學生,去打探別家的地。他去山上東尋西找地砍了小竹來做豆架,搓起草繩讓絲瓜藤往上爬,用小木棍固定支撐倒垂的番茄……一塊地,弄出個鮮活世界。 漸漸的,外公摸索出了不少經驗,加上不時串門討教,蔬菜種得好起來。外公很是歡喜,可仍不敢怠慢,常因蹲在地頭而錯過吃飯時辰,惹得家人要翻了山頭去喊。 周六去外公家,外公叫上我去摘豆、瓜,我簡直不敢相信:那一架架,一排排,一畦畦的瓜菜錯落有致,青翠茂盛,一派春意的,竟是外公家原來那荒蕪貧瘠的土地!我剪著韭菜苗,摘著脆黃瓜,掐著嫩豆角,拔著紅蘿卜,心里無比歡喜。看著這份熱鬧鮮活、豐腴肥壯,抬頭望一眼在地那邊汗流浹背忙碌的外公,我不由生出深深的敬意。 每個周六,從城里回外公家,成了我們一家最熱切向往的日子。那新鮮的瓜果蔬菜,叫我們每次都吃出城里沒有的滋味;每次回家,又會叫我驚喜地發現新冒出我所喜愛的好東西:長豇豆、四季豆如發辮般密密倒掛,玉米棒噴香噴香,生番茄想吃多少就吃多少,花生、南瓜子什么時候都有……大姨、舅舅兩家回家的次數竟也越來越勤,左鄰右舍的廚房里不時也有外公種的菜。不知不覺的,親戚鄰里之間的關系越來越和諧。外公很得意,常說:“大家都吃上了新鮮菜,多好!” 一個周末,舅舅忽然打電話來,讓媽媽趕快回家去。我和媽媽匆忙趕回家,只見外公躺在床上,一只腳高高吊在半空。媽媽輕輕揭開綁帶,一片青烏藍紫,讓人不忍目睹。媽媽一下子別過臉去,眼淚“刷刷”流了下來。 原來,最近天氣干旱,外公一大早擔了水去澆地。霧濃,挑上山坡時不小心撞在一塊大石頭上,水桶脫鉤摔了,外公滾落下來,跌傷不說,還被帶下來的石頭砸傷了腳。 看著外公煞白的臉色,媽媽心疼地埋怨:“您的年紀也大起來了,爸,不要再去種地了。”聽媽媽嘮叨責怪又懇求,外公微閉著眼,忍著痛楚說:“地荒著可惜。這次是個意外,以后我會注意點的。再說,我覺得種菜以后,我的身體好多了……” 還沒等腳傷完全好,外公又在他的菜地里忙活開來了,還是那么精神頭十足。
            【點評】 作者通過講述外公退休后迷上種菜的事,給我們刻畫了一個熱愛生活、熱愛勞動、不服老的老人形象,讀來真實感人。

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